加拿大外贸
这个给同一客户同一问题的两个版本的回复版本，请大家觉得从行文的角度，你是老外 更喜欢哪种？上面有很多高手，请大家不要吐槽文法 ，对于这个两个邮件版本的选择上我和我的老板观点针锋相对，下午吵了几句。 请网友客观评价 下，谢谢。 公司名称和颜色代码已经替换掉了。其他的 包括 语法 和拼写错误我都没改。
DEAR A
ABC COMPANY China have good factory in China, today we get some info:
TT001 was first used by France Plant, But ABC COMPANY still need confirmation with ABC COMPANY Europe for TT002. Maybe reach us on Wednesday morning.
According with our experience, ABC COMPANY is famous for powder coating which is mainly used in aluminum profiles.
You also know ACP panel is liquid coating.
We guess your customer want to match the ACP color with aluminum doors& windows in the wall.
Anyway, we think ABC COMPANY color is no problem for us, we can match it for our A2 ALUBOND, so please do not worry about the color.
If possible, you can send us the color sample of TT002 and TT001 , so we can match it at once. It will be more safe to avoild any mistake.
Best regards
第二封
Dear Mr A:
Nice day!
We have tried to contact with ABC COMPANY Asia-Pacific this morning.
We were told that code TT001 was first used by France Plant, But ABC COMPANY still need confirmation with ABC COMPANY Europe for TT002. Considering jat leg, feedback may
reach us on Wednesday morning China Time within the shortest time.
According with our experience, powder coating is mainly used in architectural profiles but liquid coating is for ACP and aluminum coil more. We guess your customer pursue a conformity with color between facade cladding and aluminum doors& windows in the wall.
You can also deliver us the samples by DHL, we will modulate same color in three days.
If color confirmed, we will order raw materials and arrange production simultaneously. And manufacturing process will be limited in a quite short time.
Best regards
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内容上可能第二封邮件里的点 多一点，请大家不要在意，纯粹从行文上考虑 ，你是老外 你选择哪个？ 行文正是我和老板的分歧所在、
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In my opinion,the second is better.in the second letter,you mentioned not only reason&problem but also the soultion!
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我的话也更加偏向于第二片，老外更容易接受些。
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我是深圳的一个货代哈，如果有货运上的问题可以找我。Q250238828，英语就不是我强项，帮不上您了。抱歉
加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards ......................................... 加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光
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