加拿大外贸
Dear Sir,I have learned from the Internet that your outdoor gear is very popular sold not only in UK but also in China,
We sincerely like to be your supplier,since we have a lot of cooperation experence with foreign company such as Janpan、Korea and America.
Our product has got very high reputation from customers.
If there is any comment of the samples, please contact us freely.We will find the answers and try best to slove it.
Warmly welcom to have a visit to our mill.
Thank you,
BestRegards,
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从发帖看；
不足：没有空行，句型单调；
优点：简洁扼要
Not to affend, just in my opinion.
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谢谢你，望润色一下，多谢
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Dear Sir,
Glad to know your outdoor gear is popular sold in UK&China.
Hope to be your supplier sincerely, since we have many cooperation experiences with high reputation from customers of Janpan/Korea and America.
Any comments of the samples, please contact us freely.
Also warmly welcom to have a visit to our mill. Thank you.
Best Regards,
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按照你的内容修改的，从Any comments of the samples看像是check sample的跟进，但开头却表示从网络得知，看得却像是开发信，我迷惑了。。
FYI（仅供参考
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谢谢你~
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谢谢你~~
加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光 加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards .........................................
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