加拿大外贸
因为公司安排我接替一同事的工作，需要给客户发一封通知函。请各位斑竹和大虾帮我看看，妥否？！小弟再此谢过！（时间比较急）另外我是做家具行业的！Dear Mr.$$$
This is Johnson from *********
I think you have known that Charlene has been pregnant and asked for half year leave. And I was arranged to take charge of her work. Charlen has introduced you & your company to me. If any inconveniece, I am so sorry to that.
It is my honor to service to you & your company. I hope we can cooperate gladly. If any question or need further information, pls feel free to let me know.
The Mid-autumn Festival, Chinese traditional festival, is coming, and pls allow me to send you my best wishes.
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首先，这是信函，不是打电话，所以介绍你自己不能用“This is”，另外信函最好用规范的语言，如please不要简写成pls，另外还有一些单词错误和短语错误我也给你改正过来了。另外要注意英文书信的格式要顶格写，不要空格。我水平有限，这些仅供你参考。
Dear Mr.$$$
I’m Johnson from *********
I think you have known that Charlene has been pregnant and asked for half year’s leave, and I was arranged to take charge of her work. Charlen has introduced you & your company to me. If any inconvenience, I am so sorry for that.
It is my honor to service for you & your company. I hope we can cooperate gladly. If you have any question or need further information, please feel free to let me know.
The Mid-autumn Festival, Chinese traditional festival, is coming, and please allow me to give you my best wishes.
Sincerely,
Johnson
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我是发电子邮件给人家,不是发传真。是不是也像你说的那样，要更改过来啊！？特别是在称呼的问题。[em06]
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Dear xxx,A good day!Let me introduce myself first. This is Johnson, Charlene's colleague. Since Charlene is a mother-to-be, she has asked half-year for leave.I will be responsible for her work. That means,from today on, I am the person who works with you. Undoubtedly, I will do my part with my heart. Any question, pls feel free to let me know.I'm right here for you.Yours Sincerely,Johnson
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Pls is widely accepted in Email communication.
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以下是引用johnson_nefu在2005-9-11 15:01:00的发言：
因为公司安排我接替一同事的工作，需要给客户发一封通知函。请各位斑竹和大虾帮我看看，妥否？！小弟再此谢过！（时间比较急）另外我是做家具行业的！
Dear Mr.$$$
This is Johnson from *********
I think you have known that Charlene has been pregnant and asked for half year leave. And I was arranged to take charge of her work. Charlen has introduced you & your company to me. If any inconveniece, I am so sorry to that.
It is my honor to service to you & your company. I hope we can cooperate gladly. If any question or need further information, pls feel free to let me know.
The Mid-autumn Festival, Chinese traditional festival, is coming, and pls allow me to send you my best wishes.
You have not made any mistakes. So you need not say any "Sorry".
As it's the first time to mail your customer, your mail should be simply written. Just stating the fact clearly is okay.It is not necessary to say too many words like " My honor, Sorry etc".
Put it simply and you'll be fine.
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谢谢。其实我是上个星期刚调到国贸部的。而且我以前是学木材科学的，也就是家具生产类的，对国贸的东西还真的是不懂，以后就请各位多多指导了！[em04][em04][em04]
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" tuyongliuxiao ", excellent! I can see your ability on both writing and foreign trading.
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以下是引用tuyongliuxiao在2005-9-11 20:25:00的发言：
Dear xxx,
A good day!
Let me introduce myself first.
This is Johnson, Charlene's colleague. Since Charlene is a mother-to-be, she has asked half-year for leave.I will be responsible for her work. That means,from today on, I am the person who works with you. Undoubtedly, I will do my part with my heart.
Any question, pls feel free to let me know.
I'm right here for you.
Yours Sincerely,
Johnson
Excellent answer!
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In this kind of e-mails, no need to be very polite, just make it simple and directly to the point. At the ending, if put REGARDS AND BEST WISHES. It would be better, I think.
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LEARN MUCH FROM YOURS.
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前不久也刚好发生在我身上，不过还好大部分跟加勒比商人的话语差不多。可是为什么客户都没有回复我呢？是不是客户觉得工作伙伴的变更会影响到后来的往来呢
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我的客户也没有回复。我采用的邮件基本和tuyongliuxia建议的差不多。不过我这几个客户也不是什么很大的客户，也不是我们关系好的客户。要不，公司也不会交给我吧。等待中，还需要努力去争取。
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我是采用tuyongliuxiao 的建议。我接手的这几个客户，只有两个算是有些单可以做。其他几个基本就是没得做的了。客户也都还没回复，等待中。努力争取中！KELE一起努力吧！[em08]
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今天推荐了一些产品过去，没单子也不是我的错
加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光 加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards .........................................
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