加拿大外贸
我正在准备面试工作so 我写了一个自我介绍，不过是通过谷歌翻译然后自己修改过后的自我介绍
希望前辈们对我的Chinglish 提点意见和建议。
Very honored to come over to your company for an interview, I simply make the following under the self-introduction. My name is ***, 24-year-old, i'm come from Henan Province, and I graduated *** University, My major is international trade. At present, I got a college degree and passed the CET4.During the college i got the "three good student" "outstanding student leader" ,and served as director of sports department in Student Union.i have good organizational skills and teamwork awareness. As an international trade student, i'm deeply realize the first point is basic English, I know the importance of English, through the CET4, I continue to fight CET6, a recent examination results have not come out, hope can pass. BEC also currently actively is i preparing for the exam. The second point is the expertise, years of study by the University, my trade-related knowledge has been enriched ,and i get the certificate of the Accredited Documenter foe international Business. My biggest regret is that during the practice college did not go to foreign trade company practice, because in the preparation of CET4, so I chose to stay in school to enrich myself. But in college a few years, i'm through social practice and many part-time work during the holidays enrich themselves, I have done bottle water sales, and in the insurance company two months. These two sales practice I deeply appreciate the good communication is a necessary means to bring about order. I am an outgoing person, willing to communicate with others, I am also an optimist, able to maintain a positive state of mind under great pressure. If I am lucky enough to become one of your company, I will play to their light and heat, to create more benefits for the company. Please give a young man a chance. Thank you.
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怎么说呢，我的内容怎么样，这就是我打的一个稿，准备面试的时候要说，所以觉得没必要抠字眼，就是担心内容邋遢。
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如果英文确实不是很好的话，建议还是不要做了。 入行容易，力行就难了。
介绍信，过于赘述，有点夸夸其谈 的感觉。看的有点累。
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感觉受到了1w点伤害 ， 我觉得我是大部分大学生刚出大学的诟病，就是实践能力差，反映在我的口语上，还无法做到跟人面对面侃侃而谈。不过我觉得我也是个有韧性的人，英语也不是一点底子没有，碰见难处我不会说放弃就放弃，前辈，你太打击人了。
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前辈称不上，和你一样 。外贸新人。 上面的话不是很好听，但是是我的第一感觉，看完你的介绍。
希望不要见怪！
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其实我也很担心我写的那东西，要按我性格来说，我会直接说，我是一个国贸专业应届毕业生，本科学历，英语四级，口语不行，无任何外贸相关经验，不过我有颗上进心。你要是看得上我，就把我收了吧。 我不怕累不怕苦，不怕开始工资低，就怕没有充实自己的舞台。
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不会不会，看见不足才能进步。
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浑身都是劲
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内容对于应届毕业生来说可以了，面试时可以精简一点，流利地说出来就可以了
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谢谢，我再精简点。
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过来看看
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这样应该挺简洁的了，既然英语口语不咋滴，也不去装大尾巴狼了，就说这么多，问什么答什么吧。
I’m glad to come over there for interview. My name is ***, 24 years old, i come from Henan
province, and i graduated ***University,my major is international trade. At present, i got a
college degree and passed the CET4. I served as director of sports department in Student
Union. I ‘m an outgoing guy, like to make friends, so i’m so nice to meet you.
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恩，有理。
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i'm come from Henan Province.。。。。不能忍。。。I come from ..要么 I‘m from....
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过来看看
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