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Mr sc,Nice day,
Last week,you already know our company profile.
According toour full experience in Vietnam cccproduct market, Korea xxx is the hot sellingproduct in vietnam’s company, such as xxx.vn, xxx.vn. the cccproduct is ourstrengthen items with more competitive price and quality than Korea.
We hope tolaunch deep cooperation and explore the market together.
Any ideas,please let me know.
这封邮件要怎么改进下。谢谢
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等待老师傅进来指点 飘过
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个人觉得：
Dear Mr. SC,
Thank you for your interest in our product A, we hope you be our partner to expand market in Vietnam together.
According to our full experience, B is popular in X.vn, XX.vn, etc. Please check comparason of A and B below:
A B
Specification:
具体各指标参数
Unit price:
Awaiting for your reply!
Regards,
Chris
思路就是表态，希望合作开发越南市场关于A产品；自己了解市场，产品有优势，具体对比；
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;P
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你这个太中式了
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完全是按照中国人的说话语态
你要多用被动
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