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我一个客户 说我报的价钱高，决定选择别的工厂以下是我的回信，哪位帮我修改下，many thanks
Hello xxxx:
Thanks for your prompt reply!
Our price is higher than others is because we use the better material.
For the long-term cooperate,we believe the quality is the most important.
No matter the copper or the stainless steel,we all use the best.
The pressure is heave to us and we really want to establish bussiness with you.
The quotation that I gave to you is for the normal customers.
Now,could you let me know what is your quantity for the initial offer?
We will try our best to give you some discount.
We hope we can work out a suitable way to meet your demand and start our cooperation.
Your timely reply will be highly appreciated
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第一句话过于主观：与其打压别人来抬高自己的工厂，不如客观点举出你们工厂及产品优势。
一点个人建议
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Hello（我咋很少见用hello，我喜欢用Dear） xxxx:
Thanks for your prompt reply!
Our price is higher than others is(删掉) because we use the better material.
For the long-term cooperate（改为cooperation）,we believe the quality is the most important.
No matter the copper or the stainless steel,we all (改成always)use the best.
The pressure is heave to us and we really want to establish bussiness (加上relationship) with you.
The quotation that I gave to you is for the normal customers.
Now,could you let me know what is your quantity for（应该是of） the initial offer?
We will try our best to give you some discount(加S).
We hope we can work out a suitable way to meet your demand and start our cooperation.
Your timely reply will be highly appreciated
FYI
PS:这个谈判，楼主十分被动啊
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看问题的角度还不到...For the long-term cooperate，你不如来点实在点的，第一次合作都没呢。直说quality还还不够，那什么来证明？
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The pressure is heave to us and we really want to establish bussiness with you.
这句话也不太妥，这样的话你们在谈价格的时候会处于劣势，无法掌握主动权。
其实在写这封MAIL的时候可以试着用EMPATHY，从对方角度来考虑问题，个人觉得效果会比较好。
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my advise is as follow,
if the customer insist your price is too high, why not list a product with cheaper material. and then list the defect of the cheaper product and your product's quality. he will surely know how to make the decision. otherwise your arguement will have no effect.
anyway this is my idea.
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