加拿大进出口外贸我这样翻译对不对,求助...



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我的样品已经做出来,客户说下周要过来我们公司,现在我想把样品拍照给客户,告诉他样品做好了,问他是现在寄给他还是等他到我们公司再拿走。
俺是外贸新人,英文很烂,语法错误的话请帮我指出来,谢谢大家!

The sample has been made, pls refer to attached photo。Send by mail for you or Wait for you to Shenzhen Take it away?


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Our sample has been made out and pls check and confirm the attached photo .
Need us deliver to you directly or when you arrive at our company to take the sample  by youself?

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The samples have been finished as per attached photo. Would you like us send you via courier or waiting for your visiting of us?     仅供参考

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还要追加一句话,请大家帮我看看这句话有没有语法错误:

我们做了两种品质的海绵供你选择,蓝色的海绵要比我们之前的报价来得便宜。

We make tow quality sponge for you, the bule is more cheaper than previous quotes.

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Sample is done (or ready), please kindly find attachment some photos for your confirmation. By the way, do you want us to send it now by courier or you take it with you when you come here next week?

我们做了两种品质的海绵供你选择,蓝色的海绵要比我们之前的报价来得便宜。

Two sponges are offered for your choice, and FYI, the blue one will be more economical than the one we quoted.

* cheaper有时不是很好听,用economical代替
* 英语中,之前的并不一定把before or previously 翻出来,quoted过去式本身就有这个意思。当然,中翻英大多时候都会把这些词带过去,很正常!

Thanks, Louis...

[ 本帖最后由 笑笑虫 于 2010-5-16 08:02 编辑 ]

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#5 是高手,O(∩_∩)O~,简洁,到位,清楚

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The sample is ready, enclosed please find its photo. We mail it to you now or give it to you when you come to our company ? Please advice.

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Another more blue sponge for reference, it is much more cheaper than the one you inquiried.

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We make two kinds of sponge with different qualities. The bule one is more cheaper than the quotation we made before.

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向的朋友们看齐,好好学英语,努力,努力再努力,A za~fighting...

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We have finished samples as your request,and kingly please check the attachment,which  is photo of samples.
By the way,about the samples ,whether you will collect them by yourself or we send to you directly?

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"Sample is done (or ready), please kindly find attachment some photos for your confirmation. By the way, do you want us to send it now by courier or you take it with you when you come here next week?

Two sponges are offered for your choice, and FYI, the blue one will be more economic than the one we quoted.

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I like 5#translation.

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大家翻译的各有所长

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翻译本来就没有标准的答案。
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