加拿大进出口外贸校对内置充电器的英文翻译,谢谢!!!



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Built-in chargers  and  Batteries
           ...... and other models with appropriative charger, and custom built-in high capacity lithium iron rechargeable batteries, please follow the instructions to operate.  The charger's charge current at  800 mA.  about 5 hours  of  full   batteries. In  addition , when the temperature is less then 10 degrees below zero,the batteries' capacity will be decline 35%,and batteries life is  about  1000 cycles. When the batteries charged sufficient, the sensors battery indicator is  green. When the batteries charged insufficient, the sensors battery indicator is red and flicker, tips response to  charge the batteries. When the batteries need to be  charged,  will be located charging plug in the cabinet side plug into the sensors power jack . When sensors charging  indicator is red .When the sensors  battery sufficient, indicator is  green. moreover, optional  extended power line can be charged while in the normal use of the sensors.




帮我看一下。。有没有什么语法错误。。。非常感谢!!!它的原文是:

。。。。等型号配备专用充电器以及定制的内置大容量铁锂充电电池,请您按照说明操作。充电器的充电电流在800毫安,充满电池约需5个小时。另外,当温度低于零下10度时,电池的容量会下降35%,电池的使用寿命约为1000次循环。当电池电量充足时,电池指示灯显示为绿色;当电池电量不足时,传感器电池指示灯会变成红色并闪烁,提示应对电池充电。当电池需要充电时,将位于机柜侧面的充电电源插头插入传感器的电源插口即可充电,充电时传感器上充电指示灯为红色,电池充满后充电指示灯变为绿色。另外选配加长电源线可以在充电的同时正常使用传感器。

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1)the batteries' capacity will be decline 35% 中的"be"要去掉
2)When the batteries charged sufficient, the sensors battery indicator is  green 这里改成“will be green”似乎更好,其他句子中比如变红也相应改过来
3)"and batteries life is  about  1000 cycles" 改成“the battery lifespan will be 1000 circles”是不是会更妥帖些?

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要下班了,匆忙译了一下,勿见笑
…and other models, all with approprative chargers and customed high capacity built-in rechargeable lithium-iron batteries. Please follow the instructions attached while operating. The batteries can be fully charged after about 5 hours’ work of the charger at 800 mA level. The capacity would reduce to 65% of normal when temprature lower than 10 degrees below zero. Normally the service life shall be 1000 charging cycles. When full charged, the indicator goes green;otherwise, goes red and flickers, warning it should be charged. When battery needs charging, please put the plug of charger, which located on the side of cabinet, into the power jack of sensor. This time the indicator is red and will go green when battery charged full. And more, the sensor could be nornally used while charging its battery by using of extended power line.

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Type,Equipment,exclusive charger & custom made built-in high capacity lithium iron Rechargeable batteries,Please follow the instructions,charger charging's  electric current should be:800mA,full charge need 5 hours appr,the batteries's capacity will 0ff 35% automatically when temperature is below 10 degrees,battery lifetime is about 1000 charging circles.the indicator will be in green color when power is full & in red color and flashing all time when power is week,showing that you need to recharge immedately.When recharge the batteries,insert the cabinet on the side power plug into the socket to charge,the sensors will be in red color when charging,indicator turns green when power is full,Plus optional long extension power wire can be charged while the sensors is in regular use.

非专业人士,仅供参考。

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非常谢谢!!!

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非常谢谢!!!

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非常感谢!!!
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