加拿大外贸
这次由于我们公司的失误，造成货运不及时，所以写封道歉信给客户，但本人英语水平有限，请高手帮忙，错误的地方更正一下，要补充的方面再补充一点，谢谢这次由于我公司的操作失误，给贵公司带去了不必要的麻烦。
这次的运输时间，如果货物从工厂出来的路上不耽搁，是完全可以按时走24号的船期。现在已经发生了这样的事情，我为了表示我公司的诚意，以及对贵公司的歉意，这次的货物空运费用全部由我公司支付。贵公司只需亲自，到马尼拉机场清关，为贵公司带来的不便，我表示深深的歉意。
我的此举，只想向贵公司表示我合作的诚意，希望贵公司能不计前嫌，继续与我公司合作。今后在与公司合作的过程中，不再出现任何差错。我公司本着客户利益至上的原则，为贵公司继续提供高性价比的产品。
再好的朋友，之间也会出现误解，希望这次的状况不要影响到我们今后的合作，生意是从无到有，朋友是从了解走向熟悉。
As a result of our company's operation mistakes，it have brought your company to unnecessary troubles.
If there is no abnormal things happened in transport from the factory to the warehouse, it could be delivered on24th, May. We will undertake the transport fees of goods by air with intention to express our apology and sincerity to your company for our fault. Your company just only goes to the Manila airport for customs clearance.
My action just want to express my sincerity, I hope your company can continue cooperating with my company. We will do not make errors in the process of cooperation in future. Our company will continue to provide your company cost-effective products with the principle “clients' interests always come first.”
No matter how good friend, it will also come into a misunderstanding. I hope that the situation will not affect our future cooperation. Business is from nothing to mature just as a friend is from strangeness to familiarity.
I express my deep apology for making inconvenience to your company once again.
[ 本帖最后由 tinalijing 于 2009-5-23 22:57 编辑 ]
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自己顶下，期待高手相助
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先标识一下 等下来看
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好长啊
不想看 帮你顶
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大致看了下，提个建议，把I改成We
BTW, your English is good.
[ 本帖最后由 aarony007 于 2009-5-23 11:54 编辑 ]
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谢谢建议，不确定这样写是否可以明白的表达出我们的诚意
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帮你改几个语法小错误吧。。
As a result of our company's operation mistakes，it have brought your company to unnecessary troubles.
it 后面加的是has...., As a result of 表示的是中性的结果吧，你这里是想表达的是不好的结果啊，感觉用在这里不太合适。。。这样写会不会更好一点, We feel so sorry that our company's operation mistake has brought your company so much unnecessary toubles.
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abnormal 是指不正常的，变态的事情吧。。。用在这里不太合适吧？？？！！！
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写句子应该更加简练才好，这样看起来不很舒服
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好长啊。。。还是你自己再修改下吧。。。。
其实，个人觉得，没关系的，客户不会很介意的你的语法毛病的，意思表达清楚就可以了。。。
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写句子应该更加简练才好，这样看起来不很舒服
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谢谢你的提醒，非常感谢，我改用unexpected吧
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We feel so sorry that our company's operation mistake has brought your company so much unnecessary toubles.
If there is no unnormal things happened in the transport from the factory to the warehouse, it could have been delivered on24th, May. For all inconvinience to you,we decide to undertake the transport fees with intention to express our apology and sincerity .What you should do only is going to the Manila airport for customs clearance.
I hope your continue cooperation with us. We will not make errors in the process of cooperation in future. Our company will continue to provide you cost-effective products with the principle “clients' interests always come first.”
No matter how good friend, it will also come into a misunderstanding. I hope that the situation will not affect our future cooperation. Business is from nothing to mature just as a friend is from strangeness to familiarity.
I express my deep apology for making inconvenience to you once again and look forward to your early reply.
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真的很长 不知道他们有没有耐心看完 ？ 特别是在刚刚耽误船期的 的问题下？、
I am writing to appologize for the delay delivery of the goods and inconvenient may caused .
For showing our sincerity,we would like to undertake the shipping charge by air for this cargo and You just need to go to the Manila airport for customs clearance.
I hope this mistaken will not impact on our future cooperation and we continuely cooperate for our bright future.
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生意是从无到有，朋友是从了解走向熟悉。
这话说得好
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