加拿大外贸
Dear all :Have a good day everyone . I am so happy to share my mood at here .when I open the mailbox as usual i got one e-mail .but when i read it .i am very disappointment .So I am share with you .
i know that you have receive so many this kind e-mail .but don't care about it ,it just for english learning ,not for business .
Dear friend ,
It might interest you to know how I got your contact. Well it is for good and I got your contact through my private search in the internet
for a matured and reliable foreign partner. I am a banker working with one of the reputable banks here in Accra, the capital of Ghana. For a
very long time now I have been in exclusive custody of private banking information of one of our bank’s customers; a Lebanese who was running
gold and diamond business here in Africa but unfortunately died in a plane crash along with his family without leaving any written [WILL].
New of the crash that took his life can be found here: http://www.abc.net.au/news/newsitems/200312/s1016642.htm
I have made several unsuccessful efforts over the years to locate any relation of his but to no avail, and the time is approaching when the
bank might recycle it into the bank’s assets as unclaimed fund. The amount is involved is $25,000,000 and the main essence of my
communication with you is to seek your cooperation in recovering this fund with 100 percent perfection considering the action plan I have
set up.
I can facilitate the release of this money within 21 banking days, providing to you the correct paperwork as the entitled beneficiary of
the fund. I want you to do this business with me and we will agree on the percentage to donate to charity and to help the less privilege in
both your country and in my country anonymously. Then with the remaining fund we may either enter into 50/50 joint investment in your
country with the fund under your management if you will agree, we shall share it 40/60 for you and I respectively while 10 percent will
be set aside to offset the overall cost of the transaction.
Let me assure you once again that this business will not last more than 21 days and I will apply for a leave on health ground in order to
be granted an opportunity by my bank to stay away from work. That will be my chance to visit you in your country for reimbursement or signing
of investment partnership contract.
Please note that this business is free from risk but needs uttermost confidentiality. Immediately the fund is transferred I will enter our
transaction archive room to retrieve and destroy all evidence of the transaction and there will be no trace to any place.
Regards,
Mr.Philip Asata.
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你的标题语法就有很多错误，英语功底太烂了，受不了了
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看的懂 就好了 了啊，，别介意 。。。没关系 楼主继续加油
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标题很多错误，你的英语实在太烂了，呵呵。
很容易误导人的。
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哈哈哈！！至少人家把单词列出来了！
不过语法是很不过关！
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哈哈 LS的几位不要打击LZ
整体写的还是不错的 细节以后再注意点就好了
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完全的初中生的英语水平， 地地道道的中国式英语，敢问LZ哪个学校毕业的？
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细节最重要
决定一切
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真不愧为勇士ye
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可以列入教程————修改病句。
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好可爱地错。
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虽然我英语不是很好，但是也看出来些错误...
呵呵
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我觉得楼主是故意的，标题就有several 处错误
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勇士，，，，呵呵。厉害
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英语水平一般的飘过.....
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