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From the view of health, it’s better to wash shopping bag once every week. Now go shopping with shopping bag is becoming the people’habit.But if the used bag is regular cleaning? At the same time of packing the fresh food, shopping bag is easily become the greenhouse of all kind of bacteria.
Canadian research Institutions make a bacteria investigation for random 24 bags from Toronto. The result appears:
The shopping bag in less than a year is inspected as above 60% bags have bacteria, including
Mildew and colon bacillus. Richard Summerber participated in this study says: the shopping bag itself is unsanitary. Clean and dry in regular time can be safety and healthy. It is best to form the habit of cleaning once time every week.
In addition, it is not better for a shopping bag to use different purposes. Such as loading clothes with shopping bag when you go out for work. Baby products the several kinds should use separately different shopping bags.
大家来看下我这翻译可有问题,欢迎大家踊跃参加

[ 本帖最后由 四色依米 于 2011-12-8 21:53 编辑 ]

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大家快来看看,冷清呀

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大家看看哪个地方要改的,谢谢了

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But if the used bag is regular cleaning? At the same time..这个是不是应该改成But how to regular cleaning use the bag.Because of...

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啊,快来人呀。

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From the view of health, shopping bag should be cleaned at least once a week. Going shopping with a shopping bag is very popular nowadays, but is your used bag cleaned regularly? Since it also carries the fresh food, shopping bag is easily becoming the greenhouse of all kinds of bacteria.
Canadian research Institutions make a bacteria investigation for random 24 bags from Toronto and the result shows that in less than a year, over 60% bags are inspected to be with bacteria, including materials of Mildew and colon bacillus. Richard Summerber participated in this study says: the shopping bag itself is unsanitary. Keeping the bags clean and dry will be much safer and healthier. It is necessary to form the habit of cleaning it once a week.
In addition, it is terrible to use one bag for several purposes. Such as loading clothes in a shopping bag when you go out for work. Different kinds of baby products should be put separately in different shopping bags.
内容没改,LZ语法需要加强~~

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谢谢了,非常感谢,确实需要改进。

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不着急 语法慢慢来  翻译的已经不错了

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In addition, it is terrible to use one bag for several purposes. Such as loading clothes in a shopping bag when you go out for work.
不好意思,这里应该是In addition, it is terrible to use one bag for several purposes, such as loading clothes in a shopping bag when you go out for work.

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另外,一条购物袋最好不要用多种不同目的,如购物袋公务外出装衣服袋,装婴儿用品袋这几种最好分别使用不同的购物袋。


最后一段的中文在这,我怎么觉得上面英文翻译是不是有点偏离中文的意思呀?

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LZ,翻译的还一般拉,继续加油!语法确实需要改进

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呵呵,知道了。谢谢大家的建议。

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In addition, it is terrible to use one bag for several purposes, such as when you go out for business, clothes and baby items should be put separately in different shopping bags.
LZ  因为没有中文,我是根据你的英文改的、、、 本来是一句话,LZ最后一段分了三句话,而且最后一句看了半天没理解要说什么... 看了中文才明白

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恩,谢谢楼上的,翻译的很好哦。你再帮我看看上面的其他地方。

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From the view of health, it’s better to wash shopping bag once a week. Nowadays shopping with a shopping bag is becoming people’s habit.But whether the used bag is regularly cleaned? And ,to pack the fresh food, shopping bag easily becomes the greenhouse of all kinds of bacteria.
Canadian research Institutions make a bacteria investigation for random 24 bags from Toronto. The result appears:
Above 60% of the shopping bags  used less than one year have bacteria, including Mildew and colon bacillus. Richard Summerber ,who participated in this study ,says: ''the shopping bag itself is unsanitary. To clean and dry it regularly can make it safe and healthy. People had better form the habit of cleaning the bag once a week.
In addition, people had better not use a shopping bag for different purposes, such as packing clothes with a shopping bag when you go out for work. And different kinds of baby products should use different shopping bags.
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