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想寫封給客人說價格的問題,但不知道怎麼寫,請大家幫忙檢查一下以下這樣寫是否可以.Dear XXXX
Thanks for your support to our company in the last year.We really appreciate our cooperation.and we hope we can continue our good business relationship and interactivity on 2012.
I nice to meet you on 2012 HK Toys Fair and pleased to that we can reach a consensus on the price for the ***.at the fair .you had confirm the final price for the ***and***is USD*** /pc, the ****is USD***/PC, the *** is USD***/PC.Attahed price list is for your review.
Right now, we had received the below inquiry from your company .but in the below e-mail, you request us use the special price for the item ***. As you know, it hard for us to use this price. Could you pls help to explain to your other colleague and tell they the new price for the item ****. Thx.
[ 本帖最后由 wawabb 于 2012-2-17 11:48 编辑 ]
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连写邮件都需要找人帮忙，那怎么算是业务员呢
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給樓上說對了.本來就不是業務員.
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总体来说楼主邮件过于罗嗦，和中国式的感觉，可以简短些哦
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写的太罗嗦了，中式英语。还有点语法错误。
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謝謝各位的意見啦.會修改.
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Dear XXXX
Thanks for your support in the last year.We really appreciate our cooperation,and we hope that the good business relationship will be continue on 2012 .
I 'm glad to meet you on 2012 HK Toys Fair and very pleased that we reach a consensus on the price for the ***.
Attachment is the price list which you confirmed it on the Fair列产品价格)
the ***and***is USD*** /pc, the ****is USD***/PC, the *** is USD***/PC.
Regarding your last inquiry E-mail.I‘m sorry to tell you that we can' t accept to give a specaial price of the item***.Our product is in high quality and the Price is resonable. Pls take the quality in consideration.Here is the new price for the item ****,Pls kindly CFM.
Best Regards!
XXX
我修改了下，楼主参考下，是不是稍微简介一点
最后你那句让他和 其他同事解释价格太中国式了我直接略去
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不同意2楼的说法，就因为不会所以来问问，请教下，这样才能进步
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你这语法也够中国的，“appreciate our cooperation"不太通顺吧，直接1,2句合并 ,I really appreciate your support。
"....business relationship will be countinue" 这句式看着都蛋疼
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Dear XXXX,
Hope every thing goes very well with you.
It was so nice to meet you at the Toys Show in Hongkong. I am glad to have some confirmation with you about the price for XXX (***is USD*** /pc, the ****is USD***/PC, the *** is USD***/PC，please see attached price list). I am afraid your counteroffer per below inquiry is not accetpable to us. Please reconsider.
Thanks.
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翻译的迹痕偏重。。。
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