加拿大外贸
上午告诉你的DHL号是错的。关于船期ETD：3月19号。ETA4月5号。 发票，装箱单和包装声明 在开船之后给你。Morning to tell you about the DHL number is wrong.
About the shipping ETD is 19/3/2012.ETA:4/5/2012.The invoice , packing list and packing declaration will be sent to you after the ship.
请教一下我还有啥可改进的地址。以上是我的翻译
[ 本帖最后由 四色依米 于 2012-3-12 21:40 编辑 ]
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应该说after shipment吧
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The previous DHL number I told you in the morning is wrong.The shipping ETD is 19th, Mar & ETA is 5th, Apr.
Invoice, packing List and packing declaration will be sent to you after the shipment
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The DHL No. is wrong i told you this morning.Kindly note the ETD is 19th,Mar&ETA is 5th,Apr. Invoice,packing list and packing declaration will be given you afther the shipment.
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Sorry for my careless,the correct DHL number should be......
ETD is 19th Mar,ETA is 5th Apr.The Invoice , Packing list and Packing declaration will be sent with B/L
这样说可以吗，我认为邮件要尽量简短，“今天早上、开船以后”这样的话就不用说了,“2012年”也不用说了 都知道是今年 呵呵
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我也觉得直接告诉正确的过去会比较好点
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非常感谢~
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you are kindly informed that the DHL No this morning passed to you is wrong, the correct one will be pass to you soon. the ETD is 19th Mar and ETA is 5th Apr. the Invoice packing list and packing declaration will be available after shipment.
我想清晰表达就可以打及格了，再好点就用套语和专业用语。
加拿大电商昨天我把提单复件发给了客户，今天收到了他回信，如下： Dear Nicholas, please send all shipping documents. We will check B/L copy and we will reply ASAP. Thank you Best Regards ......................................... 加拿大电商刚从事这行半年，对电子行业不了解，自己整理了些，算是学习，供大家分享，也请大家补充。我毕竟是个文科生，对这方面知识严重欠缺。 DVD:英文全名是Digital Video Disk, 即数字视频光
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