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Dear my friend：Sorry for keeping your waiting.
I have just ship your item the day after received your payment. But there are too many goods have to go abroad by HK post this period of time. So that it might be a waste of time in shipping. We sincerely hope that you can keep waiting.
To protect your benefits, our policy allows us to refund you, if you cannot receive item 45 days after your payment.
Thanks very much.
Connect us if you have any problem.
其实我就是想表达香港邮政最近爆仓，希望你能耐心等待。在线等，谢谢
[ 本帖最后由 patty-chu 于 2012-3-18 14:44 编辑 ]
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1、语法上注意些
2、语气可以婉转，句子可以再通顺些
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额。。。楼上的可否具体一点点，谢谢了。。
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Dear my friend：
Sorry for keeping you waiting.
I have just shipped your item the day after received your payment. But recently, there're lots of goods to be shipped by HK post, it'll take some time in shipping. Your kind waiting would be really appreciated. If you don't receive item in 45 days after your payment, you'll get a refund, which is required by the policy.
Contact with us if you have any problem.
Thanks&Best regards!
FYI
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Dear friend：
Sorry for keeping your waiting.
I have just arranged the shipping after payment received. But there are so much more goods have to pass HK custom house this period of time. So a little dealy. Please understanding.Also for your advantage, you can get a refund if you still can not receive the item within 45 days after payment.
So please don`t worry.
At the end,Connect us if you have any problem.
Thanks &Best regards
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