加拿大外贸
柜子5个一直在延，出不去，想催船公司赶紧安排出去。Dear Sir,
Before Chinese Year, we have 5 containers, which values usdxxx, shipped in your company, but now they are still delayed. As you know, the goods are all garments for winter, we must deliver to customer timely to catch the season. Once the winter finishes, the goods will be worthless and our customer will not accept the goods. He said if the goods can not be dilivered to him before xx年xx月xx日, he would terminate our cooperations. At that time we will suffer a great loss in finance and even reputation.
We will conserve the right to ask for compensation from your esteemed company and kindly suggest you to expedite shipment to avoid unnecessary loss for your esteemed company and us.
[ 本帖最后由 patty-chu 于 2013-2-26 11:53 编辑 ]
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没有用很正式的句型。个人是认为当人在气氛的时候应该不会太正式，而是略带口语性的言语，不知道是否可行
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Dear Sir,
Before Chinese Year, we have 5 containers, which values usdxxx, shipped in your company, but now they are still delayed. As you know, the goods are all garments for winter, we must deliver to customer timely to catch the season. Once the winter finishes, the goods will be worthless and our customer will not accept the goods. He said if the goods can not be dilivered to him before xx年xx月xx日, he would terminate our cooperations. At that time we will suffer a great loss in finance and even reputation.
We will conserve the right to ask for compensation from your esteemed company and kindly suggest you to expedite shipment to avoid unnecessary loss for your esteemed company and us.
Dear xxx
M xx from xx
Please kindly note the following facts:
1. 5 of our containers had been held for more than xx days since the Chinese New Year.
2. The container#:
3. They should arrive xxx before xx.xx.xxxx
These goods are significantly sensitive to season. They must be delivered on time, otherwise one of us has to pay xxx US dollars at least to cover the lost. It should NOT happen, and please make sure it won't.
Thanks for your precious time
Take care
xx
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谢谢哈，果然感觉不一样，语气不会显得太生硬。
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