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Please kindly noted that XXX & XXX is not produce anymore.XXX is an upgraded version of XXX .It have been tested and market is very well.
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lz第一句话使用了两个动词，is 和produce, 所以可以改成：Please kindly noted that XXX & XXX are not produced anymore.或者Please kindly noted that our company don't produce XXX & XXX anymore.
第三句话里面it是第三主语，所以谓语动词应该用has而不是have~
另外，market前面可以加上the
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一塌糊涂的我
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我的思路：Please note that XXX & XXX is not anymore on our production project from now on.
XXX is an upgraded version of XXX, which has been already tested and performed well in the market.
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