加拿大外贸
管理员千万要放行一下啊，在网上也没有找到模板，就自己写了一个关于要求买方接受信用证不符点的信函拿到来让大虾指导指导，水平很烂，求帮助Dear sirs,
Much to our regret,we write this to inform you that there is some discrepancies in document had be rejected under the L/C NO.XXXX against S/C No. XXXX
It's so sorry to you for the the inconvenience caused by our errors in the work.We hope you could forgive that we have no enough time to modify the B/L,but we assure the productions of high quality. As the price of the clothing continue bullish ,we believe you can obtain profits if you accept the discrepancy and gain the Men T-shirt as early as possible.
We appreciate that you can accept the discrepancy,and then finish our first cooperation enjoyable. Please connecting with us if you have any doubts.we always adhere to the principle of equality and mutual benefit.It's our hope to promote by joint efforts both trade and friendship to our mutual advantage.
We look forward your letter.
Yours faithfully,
XXXX
[ 本帖最后由 Jessica_Chiu 于 2011-6-10 23:21 编辑 ]
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是不是写的太烂了，都没人指导
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言辞恳切，理由清晰，层次分明，堪比范文。
FYI
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怎么总是感觉还少点东西呢，会不会写的太罗嗦了，还有要不要再提点下次给他们优惠啥的？
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总体写的不错，蛮有功底的，但是语法问题还是有些，
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大虾能指出来一下吗，辛苦了
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试一下,写得可能不好哦。
Apologize for the troubles occured to you & couldn't amend the B/L in a short time. of course,we've pay more attention to the production to ensure the good quality .Cost of the cloth keep reasing everyday,so we sincerely hope you can accept the discrepancies & gain the MEN T-shirt ASAP to get more profits.
Highly appreciated if you can accept our suggestions at the end,kindly pls let us know your comments by return then everything can go ahead.
FYI
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看完你的，我终于知道自己英语有多烂了，学习学习
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帖子沉了，没人指导了
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